‘ello!
I changed some pages, modified a few posts, made some room to the side and above all corrected a mass of typos my beta reader was kind enough to point out. Thanks go to him, because without his work reading the script would be even harder when plotholes are complemented by crummy writing.
Anyways, I also want to draw your attention to the Charatcer Description -page, (up-right) which has the new characters for the OVA and series both introduced in a bit more detail. Some fellows may be in there early, but there shouldn’t be any spoilers in there anymore. I even threw in some elaboration on the new mechas. They are sketchy, because they’re only inside my head until some kind soul draws them up for me. 😉 So once again, when reading (OVA first), please take advantage of the additional material. 🙂
NOTE: These pages are best viewed with Firefox; IE tends to throw off font size etc. in several cases.
If all goes well, I’ll upload the second episode of the series by the weekend.
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Edit 12.10
I am sorry it is taking me so long. I am experiencing infrequent bouts of technical difficulties and/or life, which make uploading stuff very difficult. Plus, Adobe Pagemaker is being a bitch and doesn’t want to convert my .docs into .pdfs without a fight. Stay tuned, and be patient. 🙂